I love how creepy the actress is right from the start. The way she walks and talks definitely shows the audience that something is going on with her. The wind is kind of distracting. I wish that the video had been shot at dusk so the sunlight wasn't so strong. Great job with the script though!
That was weird in the good way! I loved the shot with chips :D, I thought it worked sooo well! The blood and how you lick your hand - awesome, gives the right mood to the story!
Nice continuity of the shots! I also liked the scene where you see her crazy side, with the cutting effects where her head moves "creepy". The music fit the theme very well.
Very creepy. I like the scenes that you captured. I feel you could have drowned some of the wind with some music. Some creepy music would have really worked with the head twitch scene. Entertaining, good job.
Really suspenseful footage. I really enjoyed the idea of a serial killer luring its victims into the woods very classic! Only constructive criticism I have for you guys is more polishing in the editing.
I love how creepy the actress is right from the start. The way she walks and talks definitely shows the audience that something is going on with her. The wind is kind of distracting. I wish that the video had been shot at dusk so the sunlight wasn't so strong. Great job with the script though!
ReplyDeleteThe pause at the end was just right imo. I had just given up, then it got me. Also, blood and chips are both great junk food.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the part where it showed her gun and the ending was good too.
ReplyDeleteYour shots were really well composed! Loved the color. Nico played a really great crazy person too, haha.
ReplyDeleteThat was weird in the good way! I loved the shot with chips :D, I thought it worked sooo well! The blood and how you lick your hand - awesome, gives the right mood to the story!
ReplyDeletei think the creepy music should span a little longer, other than that fun video, gets the creepy aspect out there.
ReplyDeleteNice continuity of the shots! I also liked the scene where you see her crazy side, with the cutting effects where her head moves "creepy". The music fit the theme very well.
ReplyDeleteVery creepy. I like the scenes that you captured. I feel you could have drowned some of the wind with some music. Some creepy music would have really worked with the head twitch scene. Entertaining, good job.
ReplyDeleteReally suspenseful footage. I really enjoyed the idea of a serial killer luring its victims into the woods very classic! Only constructive criticism I have for you guys is more polishing in the editing.
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue and nice usage of the menacing inserts. Classic horror movie technique.
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